Real Writing?
Welcome back to the weekly Slice of Life! Now that I proved my tenacity at writing every day in the month of March, I come back each Tuesday to share my thoughts with the wonderful writers hosted by Two Writing Teachers.
(before I get started, I'd like to update you all on the poem I shared as part of the March slice. Remember all the angst and belly aching over choosing a title? I finally settled on "First Frost" - as I was trying to reflect that moment in time when autumn turns to winter. Also, my poem was selected to be one of 8 teacher poems collected into a small publication for the PA writing and literature project. I'm going to pretend there were more than 8 teachers who entered their poems.)
(before I get started, I'd like to update you all on the poem I shared as part of the March slice. Remember all the angst and belly aching over choosing a title? I finally settled on "First Frost" - as I was trying to reflect that moment in time when autumn turns to winter. Also, my poem was selected to be one of 8 teacher poems collected into a small publication for the PA writing and literature project. I'm going to pretend there were more than 8 teachers who entered their poems.)
Real Writing?
I just had the unmitigated joy of proctoring four days worth
of state writing assessments for my fifth graders. They were troopers; staying
focused on the task to the best of their ability. They created graphic
organizers on their scratch paper, jotted down prewriting ideas, and dutifully
read over their pieces before closing their books.
Yet it got me thinking. With the Slice of Life challenge in
March and the Poetry challenge now in April, I’ve been “watching” my own process
more carefully. How often do I “write to a prompt”? What does real life writing
look like, and can those lovely state tests tell us about what those kids can
really do?
Yes, I do write to prompts. Sometimes, that is. I’ve chosen
to respond to the visual prompts on Bud the Teacher’s blog each day in April as
part of the National Poetry Month celebration. Oh, wait… did you see the word
CHOSEN in that sentence? I’ve also written blog posts to participate in the
blog hops of friends and colleagues. Again, that was my choice. Those posts,
however, were written to a theme – not to a prompt. I wrote about my reading life – Ode toa Geeky Reader. I wrote about my love of dystopian fiction. I shared my thoughts about creating a reading culture. How I chose to
interpret those themes was left entirely up to me. Not only was the
interpretation left up to me, but I had weeks to consider the theme and craft
my post.
These fifth grade students, however, were given a simple
prompt and about an hour to plan, write, and edit their work. Presumably we can
determine the proficiency of each writer from a multiple choice section and two
prompt pieces. Yes, the excellent writers will generally be able to do this. I
was considered a strong writer in school, and I’m sure I would have been able
to “show my stuff” in this kind of setting.
Is this really how we write, though? Should it be what we are
teaching the students to handle? And if it isn’t how we actually write, why is this
task what we’ll spend the fall analyzing? We’ll agonize over every poor score,
every less than proficient indicator. How could we have gotten them to do
better on this test? Honestly, is this the goal we should hold for ourselves
and our students? Is there not a better way?
Tell me – when was the last time YOU were forced to write to
a prompt in order to prove your proficiency at work?
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