Poetry snippets - April 23
I have to admit, I struggled with today's prompt from Bud the Teacher. It is a beautiful image of a cloudy day on the beach, with beautiful sun breaking through the clouds. Two women huddle under an umbrella - which gives a splash of color to the scene. Yet I couldn't "settle" into a poem for it. Instead, I got two bits.
1) A snippet of a poem about friendship. Not really satisfying, as it came to me with some rhyme and I just don't know where to go with it.
"Friendship"
Splash of
color in a dingy day.
Flash of a
smile to light the way
Celebrating
when things go well
Commiserating
when it goes to hell
Heavy clouds
linger
Scattered
golden rays announce
Sweet
sunshine’s return
Ah well, can't win 'em all, right? I liked yesterday's poem much better.
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